Skip to content
Heartfelt drama • Viral talent moments • Stories that move the world
Best Story

PART 5 AND 6 >> I hid a baby monitor in my daughter’s kitchen three weeks ago and I have listened t…

· vongnirouth73

PART 5: THE NAME HIDDEN IN THE FILE

Linda slowly opened the final folder.

Unlike the others, this one was thin.

Only six pages.

But every page had one thing in common.

The same last name.

Dawson.

Dale’s breathing became shallow.

“Don’t,” he said.

Linda looked up.

“I haven’t said a word yet.”

“You don’t know what you’re looking at.”

“I know exactly what I’m looking at.”

She slid the first page toward Paula.

“This is a business registration filed in May of 1998.”

Paula frowned.

“I don’t understand.”

“Read the second name.”

She did.

Her lips moved silently before the color drained from her face.

“…Dale Dawson.”

He immediately shook his head.

“I was nineteen.”

Linda nodded.

“You were.”

“I didn’t even know what I was signing.”

“Perhaps.”

She turned another page.

“This one is from eight months later.”

Again, Dale’s name appeared.

This time beside the woman from the photograph.

Her name was printed clearly across the top.

Janice Holloway.

Colleen let out a slow breath.

“I prayed I was wrong.”

“You know her?” Paula asked.

“I knew her better than I ever wanted to.”

The room fell silent.

Colleen folded her hands together.

“In the late nineties, she traveled from town to town giving ‘free financial planning’ seminars for seniors.”

I looked at her.

“I remember those.”

“You remember the cookies.”

She gave me a sad smile.

“I remember the widows.”

Linda quietly continued.

“Mrs. Holloway never owned the companies.”

“So why was she there?” Paula asked.

“She found the people.”

“And someone else handled the paperwork.”

Linda tapped Dale’s name.

“For a short time…”

“…that someone was him.”

“No!” Dale shouted.

“I wasn’t part of anything.”

“You signed the documents.”

“I signed what my uncle handed me!”

The kitchen became quiet again.

That was the first time anyone had heard about an uncle.

Paula stared at him.

“You’ve never mentioned an uncle.”

“He died.”

“When?”

“I don’t remember.”

“You don’t remember,” Paula repeated.

“You remember Boyd from work.”

“You remember every football score from college.”

“You remember what I ordered on our first date.”

Her voice began to shake.

“But you don’t remember the uncle who supposedly had you signing legal papers?”

Dale looked away.

“I was embarrassed.”

Linda reached into the folder again.

“There is one more document.”

She unfolded a yellowed newspaper clipping.

The headline read:

LOCAL ELDER FRAUD INVESTIGATION ENDS WITHOUT CHARGES.

Beneath it was a grainy photograph.

Three people were walking out of the courthouse.

Janice Holloway.

A man whose face had been circled in blue ink.

And, several steps behind them…

A much younger Dale.

Paula covered her mouth.

“You were there.”

“I told you,” Dale said quickly.

“I worked for my uncle.”

Linda looked directly at him.

“Then explain something.”

“What?”

She placed one final page on the table.

“This ledger was recovered from the storage unit Janice Holloway abandoned two years after the investigation.”

Nobody moved.

Linda pointed to a handwritten column.

“Every family she visited was listed here.”

Names.

Addresses.

Dates.

Amounts.

Some entries had check marks.

Others had question marks.

Halfway down the second page…

I saw my own name.

Marguerite Ellis.

Next to it, in faded blue ink, were four words.

‘WAIT UNTIL HUSBAND DIES.’

The room spun.

Paula gasped.

Colleen burst into tears.

I gripped the edge of the table to keep from falling.

Slowly…

very slowly…

I looked up at Dale.

He wasn’t looking at me.

He was staring at that sentence as though he had never seen it before.

Then he whispered five words that chilled every person in the room.

“I thought she destroyed that ledger.”

PART 6: THE FIRST PERSON WHO LIED WASN’T DALE

Nobody spoke.

The words on the yellowed ledger seemed to grow larger with every passing second.

WAIT UNTIL HUSBAND DIES.

My own name.

My own address.

Written decades before I ever sold the Ridgeway house.

Linda carefully closed the folder.

“I wanted Mrs. Ellis to see this before anyone else did.”

Paula looked as though she might faint.

“Mom…someone planned this?”

“I don’t know.”

Colleen answered before I could.

“They didn’t just plan it.”

“They waited.”

Dale suddenly slammed both hands on the table.

“I’ve never seen that ledger before.”

Linda didn’t argue.

Instead, she asked one simple question.

“Then why did you say you thought it had been destroyed?”

Silence.

A long, painful silence.

Finally Dale lowered his head.

“I…I misspoke.”

“No,” Linda replied calmly.

“You reacted.”

“There is a difference.”

Paula stepped backward until she reached the kitchen counter.

She stared at her husband as though she were seeing him for the first time.

“What aren’t you telling me?”

“I already told you.”

“No.”

Her voice became firmer.

“You’ve been answering questions.”

“You haven’t been telling the truth.”

Dale looked at me.

“This is what you wanted.”

I shook my head.

“What I wanted was a son-in-law.”

His shoulders dropped.

“What I got…”

“…was a man who counted my bedroom like rental property.”

The words hit him harder than I expected.

For the first time, guilt crossed his face.

Real guilt.

Then it disappeared.

He straightened his back.

“If we’re putting everything on the table…”

“…let’s put everything on the table.”

He reached into his wallet.

From behind his driver’s license, he pulled out a folded piece of paper.

“I’ve carried this for four years.”

Paula frowned.

“What is it?”

He unfolded it carefully.

It was a check.

The amount was handwritten.

$180,000.

Payable to:

Marguerite Ellis.

The date was four years old.

“I offered this to your mother.”

Paula turned toward me.

“Mom?”

“I’ve never seen that check.”

“I handed it to you.”

“No.”

“You refused it.”

“No.”

“You tore it up.”

“I most certainly did not.”

Dale held it higher.

“I kept it because I knew this day would come.”

Linda stepped closer.

“May I?”

He hesitated.

Then he handed her the check.

She studied it for less than ten seconds.

Then she smiled.

Not happily.

Knowingly.

“Interesting.”

“What?” Paula asked.

Linda flipped the check over.

“The back is blank.”

“So?”

“If Mrs. Ellis refused it…”

“…why didn’t your bank cancel it?”

Nobody answered.

Linda continued.

“If she tore it up…”

“…how is it still intact?”

Dale swallowed.

“I kept it.”

“You said she tore it.”

“I mean…”

He stopped.

He had trapped himself.

Again.

Linda placed the check beside the ledger.

“One lie creates another.”

Paula slowly covered her eyes.

“I don’t even know what’s true anymore.”

Colleen walked across the kitchen and wrapped an arm around her niece.

“You know one thing.”

Paula looked up.

“What?”

“Your mother.”

Colleen pointed toward me.

“She has never lied to you.”

Tears rolled down Paula’s cheeks.

She looked at me with the same eyes she had as a little girl after waking from a nightmare.

“I’m sorry, Mom.”

Before I could answer…

Linda’s phone rang.

She glanced at the screen.

Her expression changed instantly.

“What is it?” I asked.

She didn’t answer.

Instead, she listened for several seconds before quietly saying,

“You’re certain?”

Another pause.

Then she closed her eyes.

“Oh…no.”

Every person in the kitchen stared at her.

She slipped the phone back into her pocket.

“I just received a call from the county records office.”

“What happened?” Paula whispered.

Linda looked directly at me.

“Mrs. Ellis…”

“They’ve found another deed.”

My heart stopped.

“What deed?”

Linda took a slow breath.

“The deed to this house.”

I frowned.

“What about it?”

She answered with seven words that turned every face in the room white.

“It no longer matches the one you signed.”

CLICK HERE TO READ CONTINUE PART 7>>8

One Comment on “PART 5 AND 6 >> I hid a baby monitor in my daughter’s kitchen three weeks ago and I have listened t…”

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *